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Poem Number 1534
If the sea were vodka
there would be gray goose in waves
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If the sea were vodka
And I was a duck
I'd start at the bottom
And drink my way up.
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if the sky were soda
and i were a balloon
i'd inhale all the gas
and fly to the moon
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I like the way you think. ~nakedowl
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