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Poem Number 485
Lummocks
Crivens
Lawks a-mercy
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Poem Number 486
A radical departure
another liberal leaves
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Poem Number 487
MY DEMONS INSIDE (title)
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anger builds up in me
why do i have this hatred inside me
feeling the way i do
screaming the way i do
hatred still goes on
building up inside me
adding to the fuel
just waiting to boil over
terrifying my heart
poisoning my m8ind
eating at my soul
anger builds up in me
I got to fight these demons inside me
dreaming the way I do
thinking the way I do
and hatred goes on
boiling up inside me
adding to the fuel
just waiting to tear me down
ripping my heart
killing my mind
devouring my soul
and the hatred still goes on
^*AMY*^
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