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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Three
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Poem Number 407
While trying to find what you want I lost me...
How could this be?
Am I a tree?
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Poem Number 408
Blindingly fat
Perceptually thin
Intriguingly wide
A Cheshire grin
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Poem Number 409
ravish me with radishes
comfort me with cucumbers
please me with parsnips
tempt me with tomatoes
rouse me with rutabagas
give her some sausage
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hubba hubba
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Poem Number 410
OR END IT ALL (title)
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I don't think I can do this
fight the battle any longer
I truly believe, it will never end
afraid to say aloud
what is really going on
inside this warped mind of mine
be committed for sure... I would
frightened, terrified
threatened, terrorized
every single minute
everyday of my life
no one understands me... never will
and neither will I
therefore, no one can help me
do I just keep trudging along
this endless battle in my mind
or end it all
^*AMY*^
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