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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 408
nothing left to hide
anyone who'd been looking,
has long since gone away
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This is an almost perfect Haiku (one extra syllable in the third line) that touches the heart and paints a vivid picture. Poetic redition of a place most folks have been to - thank you for painting it for me. Lida Jo from Idaho
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