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Poem Number 717
Love is just a four letter word that has no real meaning
love is just a word out of the dictionary
Love destroys beings physically and mentally
love floats on the wind waiting to be inticed to stay
love endures in the farthest mountains of lonely middle aged goddeses hearts
love passes by those stone faced frozen soul casualitys whos beauty weans in time
like a picked flower on a late summer day.
love infects the mind and kills the soul

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every word has meaning - maybe it's just 4 letters...
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the first line was a good start to a poem.
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lines 4-7 by double J.J.
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if love endures whow could a godess be lonely - at any age?

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love is not only a four letter word
but a word chosen for a reason
perhaps to describre a feeling longed for
or a feeling once experienced
common seems to be in feeling
to touch to comfort to long for
to hate
Love is all this and more
love doesn't have to be in your life
but the chance is there
don't miss it
jd

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Poem Number 718
no gain, no rain, no pain, no gain
some hope, whadda dope, try to cope, some hope

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