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Poem Number 824
i'm planting the freak flag in HSC3, baby!
maximum adventure available in the navy
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Poem Number 826
the door
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Buses flaming past in
The October sun.
I do remember London with
My Ma by my side.
“Isn’t it warm?”,
She said
“Almost like spring.”
I shivered .
Daddy squeezed Sian,
Smiled with real warmth,
At his complete family.
There is none of the journey
In my narrative; no montage
Of A to B. Just a black car,
Taking us to a grey house
Three stories high.
I asked the question before
We entered. I heard
“This is home now.”
As a door closed.
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