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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Five
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Poem Number 3771
anti-aging properties
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Commentary:
Take off the critical sunglasses,
you're indoors now,
and stand up,
find woodwinds and strings
that soar
reach your hands
to affirmation,
know that you will fall victim
to your own
stained and dirty hands
but at this moment, you should roar
reach for a book
and throw it.
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for sure!
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for sure!
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Poem Number 3772
a new philosophy begins
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Commentary:
Pronouns are so easy to slip into.
A comfortable fabric for me,
I am so
lazy and tired
that I try to
sleepwalk,
dreamtalk,
write when I'm drunk
or stoned
and sinking.
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chalk it up too
when i'm drunk
or stoned and sinking,
thinking swimming is good and fine,
but I so badly want to get to the bottom of this
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oh! the bottom is such a sudden stop-
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