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Gothic/Surreal - Two
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Poem Number 1068
Leaving the outskirts of Arkham, through the trees, the moon followed,
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Poem Number 1071
you again
me but not me
a river washes away
what time can't
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to find freedom in each death
a hope for relief for all
that suffer the same fate
letting the grip release the only anchor
to any real or imagined landscape
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an illusion and discomfort
the unrequited and unresolved
sense that there was a piece
that fit where the emptiness
breathes
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to protect us from the sensation
that if any moment we relax our vigilance
we will be swallowed in blackness
that follows the unsuspecting
yet never seems to worry them
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great read. i like this. - N
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