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Haiku - Four


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Poem Number 1906
no need to smell the rank-
rose over to discern autumns
magnetos stall

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Poem Number 1907
breath cloud drifts away
ice diamonds on every tree
Winter majesty
on this ice scorched day.

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Commentary:
ice scorched day
an enviable phrase - one of those "I wish I had written that" phrases.
Lida Jo from Idaho 2/12/08
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Poem Number 1908
LOL
LMAO
Language is dying
WTF

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Commentary:
Very clever. Doesn't really fit the Haiku pattern, but it speaks Truth.....BR
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Counts
Every ache and pain you cause
No matter right say you
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I know LOL but what are LMAO and WTF? Your comment on "language is dying" is stabbingly true. Well done!!
Lida Jo from Idaho
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1907
WTF is for what the fuck, but LMAO no idea... Keiko from Mexico
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LMAO=laughing my ass off
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Poem Number 1909
in silver moonlight
tiny wings ride the night air
spirit sustenance

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Commentary:
uplifting :)
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Cinnabar, this is a great opening line full of possibility.
Red Ruby Lady, you capped it wonderfully. I especially like "tiny wings ride the night air".
Lida Jo from Idaho
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Poem Number 1910
summer sweet nectar
upon his lips wet kisses
sticky indulgence

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erotic :)
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Delicious!
Always wonderful to hear from RubyRed Lady
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summer is sweetness
let's feed bread to the gulls
birds replace my love
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GrandmaBea, May you know love!

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Poem Number 1911
seagulls marked descent
--GrandmaBea
dreams of summer 2007
--GranmaBea
we shall wait again.
GB

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