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Poem Number 3428
many lovely words
lost in the darkeness of night
remember with tears
Of the day we got into that fight
The way we argue for no apparent reason
Our hearts are cold, like the winter season.
Everything must pass
pain wasn't meant to last
but for now flames blackened the mood
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Poem Number 3429
Look in the fire
There are galaxies thriving
See how it's alive
feeling the wind
and it's twisting and jiving
cosmic state of mind
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Commentary:
Nice juxtaposition, Dr. W., and welcome. I don't believe I've seen your work here before, but I love the image of galaxies amid the sparks and billowing plasma.
Sorry about whoever it was added the line below. Lately it seems fewer people (bother to) understand what the Haiku salon is for :-/
--eritain
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I wonder if it is because they don't understand, or just because they want to ruin a beautful Haiku, kind of like vandalism.
...WR
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i like it
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Poem Number 3430
having my lunch in
Debussy's Engulfed Cathedral
bacon gets soggy
theres a man watching
abstract vaguely an image
probing my minds eye
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Poem Number 3431
suddenly I wake
the mood begins to convey
darkness is profound
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Poem Number 3432
High Street Kensington
Olympia for Earl's Court
Mornington Crescent
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Poem Number 3433
Marbled antelopes
are streaming across the veldt
Nature's masterpiece
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Poem Number 3434
Some hot buttered toast
Bacon frying in the pan
Life's simple pleasures
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